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Captain Scrumptious!

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A little thing I threw together. I'm gonna re animate it so it looks smoother with a different story, but I was wondering if I could get some feedback on this one and I figure you guys are avid flash watchers and decent critics :D

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this reminds me a Tim Burton's stain boy but he's more happier and a lot more friendly too GOOD STUFF

and pancakes were had

I love the scrumptious dance! Music went well, very simple. Isnt comedy supposed to be simple?

This one really made me laugh.

I'm usually very critical on drawing detail, but I though the whole crayon look really fit well with the story. I thought it was funny how the hero destroyed more than he saved. The name "Dr. Distasteful" was a nice touch. If you see a need to improve the animation by all means do so--just make sure to keep the simple, hand-drawn artwork.

Nick-The-Holy-Potato responds:

Thanks!

Sea Level

Man, anybody who builds a city beneath sea level is asking for a tsunami. Besides that, great animation, nice story I suppose, and the music was good too. ^.^

Nick-The-Holy-Potato responds:

It's just a really big puddle. ^.^

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The music seemed pretty unfitting, but it reminds me of my childhood somehow.
It seems very slow paced too.

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Score
4.28 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 15, 2011
9:53 PM EDT