A whale?
This short was too lengthy for this type of joke. The audio needs a boost as it was too quiet, and the visual was okay for the most part. It was "meh".
have fun watching
A whale?
This short was too lengthy for this type of joke. The audio needs a boost as it was too quiet, and the visual was okay for the most part. It was "meh".
took too long
animation was all good but it took too long to get to the punchline. over all pretty good just next time a lil faster. i couldve made a samich wit that amount of time
Well
i liked it well enough, but the timing was way to long and drawn out, the intro coming from outside could be cut down to a 1/4 of what it was and the i would speed up the pauses between the char's dialog. but other than that the idea was good, and the drawings where ok. keep up the good work and keep working on this one until you get the timing down.
Meh...
Animation was alright but the joke wasn't all that funny.