this is awesome
Nice and simple.
You made yourself an interesting series. I love the simplicity of it. You have some nice humor in it, which keeps it from being boring, and the progression of the series is very nice. Keep up the good work. :3
It' s great but when you continue the series? I would know other caracters and I would see more fight!
hmm it says here u dont know how to use magic............... :3
This was pretty good for someone who seems to be relatively new to animating. The animation was pretty smooth and the sound was good.
However a couple things to work on, first of all the voice acting was really lackluster. The guy sounded so unenthusiastic with everything he said. Put a little more feeling into it and this would have been much better. Second, you could add just a bit more animation to it. There wasn't much in terms of movement and that would help a lot (especially with the silent girl).
I enjoyed watching this and got a few giggles out of it, I look forward to seeing the next part of this. Keep practicing and good luck.