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I thought this was an amazingly funny animation!
This could use som patching
The animation was really good, but frankly that's the only good side of this animation. Here are some things you might want to consider improving:
-The story could have been better. I understand it's about absurd humor but still, some coherency would be in order.
-The pace of the animation was a bit too slow in my opinion. I think it would have worked better if the scene switches weren't that long. You might want to check Egoraptor's submissions for reference.
-The sound quality could have been better. The voices were difficult to listen to.
-Last but not least - you should work on your english. The translation was quite bad.
Generally, I think you have talent for this and if you work on the aforementioned issues, I'm sure your future flashes will be terrific.
OROCHIMARU AS MJ WTF
is good but some stupid
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