ok but its going to be blamed

it's ok but this looks like it was made in pivot. also its something that seems it would be on youtube. all in all it was ok needs sound

Nice sequence, lack of polish

The action sequence itself, while it has a few cliches, is actually pretty good. See if you can smooth it out, add sound and music, and slow it down so the action can be appreciated.

Good

but the sound?

ummm

two things, one add sound, two and an idea

Not bad for first time

The main thing is there was no sound. 2nd, I know it will take much longer to make, but if you do more frame per frame it looks SO MUCH smoother and looks a million times cooler. yet compared to most first creations... well done