Okay
Not bad, I loved the animation, but it was very tough to hear the sound. I could only hear some of the stuff in the dialog. Other than the sound, not bad.
Author Comments
Hi Everyone,
New to posting in Newgrounds but all the work is great. Looking forward to posting many more toons. Enjoy "Charlie's Anatomy" - about a dying banana who thinks he still has what it takes.
-Ryan
www.RyRy.co
Twitter.com/ryrydotco
Preloader...
I'd suggest to use a preloader, I had to refresh the page to get the movie going...
Nice animation though.
ryrycomics responds:
thanks for the feedback. i def. need to adjust to the newgrounds platform, preloaders and replay btns and what not
Imbalanced Breakfast
Okay, let's get one thing straight: when they're spotted, they're sweeter and great for baking bread with them. And they're extremely sweet. If they're completely brown, that's the iffy point.
This is a goofy cartoon, but it didn't make me laugh. Also, it lacks a replay button. Looks like this was meant for You Tube but sent here for a wider audience. In fact, the whole thing was kind of... I don't know... STUPID.
For a Dramedy, this was technically okay, but the writing smelled more like cheese than fruit....
Credits & Info
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3.18 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- Mar 6, 2011
- 2:10 PM EST
- Genre
- Comedy - Original