Hello, this is my first flash, I'm new at this, so it may not be good to anybody, but I'm proud of it. It is a simple little flash of Mario trying to hit a ? block. Two flashes inspired me, I can't remember the first one but it had Mario trying to hit a ? block. The other was Castle Calamities. Honestly, I can't remember who made those, but I must say thank you for your inspiring videos!XD
Oh, and if you have constructive criticism, please share. Let me know what I need to improve on.
Enjoy!
Pretty sweet!
All the jokes were pretty funny, but here's a couple of things to work on;
It obviously needs a preloader.
The Hadoken was too soft and I missed it the first time.
There is constantly a white box around the screen.
Some actions need to be slowed down so that the viewer can see them better. And also to create tension. Pretty nice job with this, love to see more!
First Time Success
I see good things in your future.
Now a funny twist would've been if he hit it, and a poison mushroom came out. But Luigi works just as well. Keep it up.
Lmao
Good for a first, I thought the using the pipe as a cannon with Yoshi hitting the switch was pretty original. Also, that thwomp hitting the P button was really hard to see, I didn't even notice it my first time watching.
Main thing is that the animation just needs to be a bit smoother, and that just comes with experience. And if you weren't, try using a vcam for zooming in and such. I thought it could be more zoomed in since there's plenty of unused space above the block (for most of the animation anyways).
But yeah, nice for a first~ Much better than mine. lmao
Hehe
This was entertaining, good work.
Unlike the rest o' em 'first timers'...
This was actually FUNNY.
Enjoy your 5/5.