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Ripply Nippleskin, my RL roommate, kicks a pile of leaves on an afternoon walk.
This Made Me Laugh... Cheap, but a Laugh
Normally, I'm in a foul mood and never want to see another horrible Flash again. This, I imagined, was one of those times. However, the silly surprise ending caught me off guard, and the reaction was priceless.
Even though it looks as though the production values are poor... and they are, actually... the cartoon was assembled far better than one may think. It's short, sweet, and even the preloader "Play" button--that being the door--is a clever touch that transcends the notion that little thought went into this piece.
If the artwork improves, even an Author called "crapcartoons" can shine on the Newgrounds stage.
I appreciate criticism when it's constructive. Obviously I chose my username for a reason.
The art was good but everything else sucked
I watched some of your videos... I believe we're on similar levels when it comes to animating skill.
Needs some work
I like the animation and art, but you need a start button, credits frame, and disable the loop. I really can't say I saw anything else wrong with it
Fixed, to some degree.
Fernando accepts a difficult mission from a suspicious guy who buys him some yoghurt.
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