With a flash size of 23 MB, I was expecting something a bit better/longer. The story wasn't really funny or interesting.
The voice acting was great, though. Good job on that!
Yeah...as soon as I saw it was an Anime and heard "tentacles", my otaku brain kicked in and said, "You know what's coming. There isn't an Anime fan out there who, like a demented, modern-day Pavlov's dog, doesn't immediately make the connection when they hear that word." However, my logic came in and said... "Wait a minute. It's only rated teen. It could just be a horrible Lovecraft monstrosity." I'm surprised you got away with that rating, since the content was a little more than just "implied".
However, that was only one "telegraph". The other was when the guy mentioned it shapeshifted into a human. Well...that pretty much made me expect the "surprise".
All in all, I didn't know if it was going to be a horror or a "comedy" by the end. If it hadn't been for the "pics" at the end, you probably could have passed it off as a pure horror.
Final Comment: ...Rather sick, even the "humor".
Animation was good, especially bus. Then why so low rating? NO SUBTITLES.
Horrible voice acting. You guys are all giving this 10s, 'omigawd drawings so gud!" big deal, who talks like that? "HURR I HOPE THERE ARE NO WOLVES OUT THERE LOL"
Horribly written. Just horrible.
WHAT THE HELL DUDE WE REHEARSED OUR PARTS FOR 8 WEEKS STRAIGHT!!!
Good graphics, lame story. Every twist could be predicted from the start where an accurate description of the monster was given.
Also, what's the whole point if the two get together in the end anyway? Monster might have stayed human as well. Or does the girl have a serious octopus fetish?