The art could use some work, but you really make up for it by all the different angles and music alone. Its also pretty neat how you didn't use any voices for the characters. We don't hear them speak, but we get an impact from them.
I also liked how your character development is.
You have my personal thumbs up. Keep it up.
thanks! im glad you enjoyed it
i see some greatness here besides the look, the story and plot were good and the guns look better then the people also the sound produce a creppy eerie effect that fixes the lack of voices well done .
The style is ugly. So Ugly its permanently stuck in my mind as what not to do. You've captured the essence of a Cliche Western, and by god I wouldn't mind never seeing this again.
I gave this a four because of story value alone. I've seen this before, a ghost out for vengeance, but the twist at the end came to no suprise whatsoever. The way you incorporated the music from some of my favorite westerns worked.
The only improvement is everything, and with practice, and someone that has some kind of inclination for storytelling or at least knows what not to do, thats only an inevitability. Keep trying.
nice 0 flashes you got there, you clearly know the art of flash making really well. I dont mind constructive critism, but your pretty much just shitting all over it without giving and helpul advice. Improve everything? im sorry you hated it so much dickhead
I'm going to be blunt.
The art-style is ugly. So Ugly its permanently stuck in my mind in a good way. You've captured the essence of an old school western of High Plains Drifter, and by god I wouldn't mind seeing this fleshed out further and made into a full production film.
I gave this a ten because of story value alone. I've seen this before, a ghost out for vengeance, but the twist at the end flattened me. The way you incorporated the music from some of my favorite westerns is perfect.
The only improvement is your art, and with practice, thats only an inevitability. Keep it up.
thanks! i hope to see you reviewing my future flashes.
One of the best things I've seen on newgrounds
Amazing. I loved the story and the music. If you just work on the art a bit more, it would be perfect. Despite its shortcomings in the quality of the art, I will still give it a 10. I mean it was mostly the animation that was bad, i actually liked the way the protagonist looked.
the best thing on newgrounds? i think this is my favorite review so far!