I was not that impressed by this. I have to give you credit for at least making a harmless cartoon. It's just something that doesn't appeal to me much. It actually is a fairly original premise. It probably would have been a lot better if the animation was slicker. I just didn't see any noteworthy slapstick or anything.
It's fine for what it is. Maybe I've been on this website too long to expect something crazy to happen. It should just have more things going on. It doesn't have to be fancy, just make it so that it stands out from other submissions. It's an okay try.