It's really not bad... but you should practice drawing in Flash because it appears that those are just pictures of drawings of paper, and in Flash it would be more smooth with less jerkiness and movement of focal point. Altogether my vote was 3/5. Keep on going and you will be a great someday.
A bit morbid
I like the frame by frame rough draft look. The heart break scene is certainly the most detailed. The dude who reviewed first summed up everything that needed to be said. I will add this: Take your time and don't rush practice is everything.
I can see that you knowhow to draw.
complete it with some color and music/dialog and it will probably be a smash.
I do agree with you this time, this year for the holiday. My first time not having anyone and it sucks but got to roll with the punches.
Thanks for the feedback! I will improve upon this in the future and I ensure you my next animation will be illustrated better, have sounds and will have colour.