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Hey guys, i fixed the loader and the sound is more better.
I hope this fixed things dont disturb you any more ;D

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keep up working

i have seen realy much flash works there where many first trys of people and i must say ur is one of best first flashes i have seen so far... but of course there is much to work on no master is fallen out of the sky yet.
the design and animation are okay but will improve with experiance...
the audio its okay (much first trys didnt even have sound -.-) but maybe u should look for some sounds at the internet insted of blowing in ur mic...
most u have to work on ur storyline and that stuff cause i didnt get it what this flash realy is about :-s
dont let my rating of 6 get u down its more than most early submits gets from me but u get potencial to do better so try it

LazyCrazyLuis responds:

Thanks men, I will try to do it more better, but who know, this is my first try, i like the animations so i will learn with the time.

The audio

Ruins this. You should download recordpad in the download section and use a mic to record and edit your audio.

LazyCrazyLuis responds:

Yeah, the audio is the hard part, but thanks for the information :D

Très bien

Une très bonne animation , j'ai bien aimé le style. J'ai hâte d'en voir plus.

Bonne continuation

Axetree Out.

Pretty good

pretty good, considering this was your first animation
keep up the good work

LazyCrazyLuis responds:

Thanks ;D

Credits & Info

4.16 / 5.00

Feb 8, 2011
3:06 PM EST