keep up working
i have seen realy much flash works there where many first trys of people and i must say ur is one of best first flashes i have seen so far... but of course there is much to work on no master is fallen out of the sky yet.
the design and animation are okay but will improve with experiance...
the audio its okay (much first trys didnt even have sound -.-) but maybe u should look for some sounds at the internet insted of blowing in ur mic...
most u have to work on ur storyline and that stuff cause i didnt get it what this flash realy is about :-s
dont let my rating of 6 get u down its more than most early submits gets from me but u get potencial to do better so try it