Very good for a first submission, detail was a little lacking at points, but overall, this was very good.
Thank you for this flash. :)
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i have no words for this my friend its beautiful :')
I like it.
I liked it. The story was really good, and at the end I wanted to know what happened next. Although the body shapes looked a little bit awkward. I don't know, something about the torso just looked weird. But anyways, it was really nice :D