My only suggestion is to drop the voice and put in an instrumental music.
Best of Luck.
Wow, I really like this :). It's really really funny and well made, I like the kind of 'paper' background. The only thing I didn't like was the voice.. It might be on purpose.. But it still sounds sooo boring xD.. made me kinda tired . The funnyness and the graphics were a great compensation anyway :). And the voice also was kinda funny ^^. Overall it's really great! Keep up the good work!
yea, the voice was suppose to be as boring as possible lol