Harsh criticism
Keep going with flash, get the basics down and see where you feel like going with it from there; you've got potential simply from the amount of time you've spent on this/had to learn what you do. Keep it up!
Author Comments
Hey my first flash submission. Yeah it sucks but I only worked for about an 1hour on it. Heck I'm not even giving it 5 stars and its my own work. Give it what you want. I don't care, I just wanted to submit something. This will probably be blammed soon anywho. Oh well, if you find it entertaining, sweet. If not, sorry I wasted your time. If you want to see anymore of my stuff you can look at my profile, i have a link. All my other stuff sucks though cuz I'm new to flash. Started January and can only work on it 50 minutes a day for 4 days a week. So enjoy.
P.S. You can press the play buttons to add background music to mess around with as well. But the beats don't go together so make sure you stop one to play the other.
P.S.S. Any tips would be helpful since I'm new
P.S.S.S. I don't know what P.S. stands for.
OscarMayerWinnr responds:
Thanks dude. I will. And since you and Trenson have inspired me I shall make something else for you guys. Although it will probably suck but hey its progress.
Have to agree pretty bad
The bass drum sounds like a trash can lid, the 2 others sounded like...i really dont know point is you really should play with a drum set before you make a flash based on one.
OscarMayerWinnr responds:
I would, unfortunately this was an assignment for school. If it wasn't I would not have wasted your time. But thanks for agreeing with me.
Potential...
This could be something actually, I would suggest having an option bar for choosing our own drum sounds, more loops to add that don't already have a beat to them, and again I mention the importance of better drum samples to play with, that are actual drums (not a burp and a shotgun, not useful)
Otherwise this was actually a good idea. maybe if you spent more than an hour on it you could make something really awesome. maybe a record button too so we can make beats and have them recorded. just a thought.
OscarMayerWinnr responds:
Right, well I thank you for actually giving me something to work with. To be honest I would love to actually do all that. Problem is... I'm in highschool and the class I'm in we are given specific assignments. The original of this was even crappier. if I have time I can try to update it. But I don't have flash at home and only at school which makes it quite annoying. So hopefully in college I will have flash and can actually spend time on stuff. Anywho thanks for the support guy.
Pointless
There was nothing but an unappealing backround beat and some annoying sounds.
P.S: P.S. stands for post-script.
OscarMayerWinnr responds:
touche kraid, touche
Terrible
Sounds bad, looks bad, no taste at all, and looks like it was made by a 1st grader.
My suggestion is that you work a lot harder on the animations and find more pleasing sounds. all of them sounded really annoying. The music that you had on their that looped was good but it was pointless having it with the drum set noises. Maybe you will do well one day
OscarMayerWinnr responds:
Well thank you I try to fail in your eyes as best as possible.