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well enjoy :)
Not bad for a beginner
Now you gotta realize something about stick fighting if that's what you're into. It's a tough audience to please with this stuff. Why? Cuz there is a lot of cool stuff out there. In order for you to become successful at this, you need to put more animation into the fighting, use less of the unoriginal sounds (DBZ). Now some people might say give the fighting a purpose and I agree on some kind of level. If you know your animation isn't going to be super intense, then yea, put some reason into the fighting. But ya know what? If you make really cool fights, i see no reason in giving the fight a purpose. I saw entanglement 2 and it had no purpose but man was it badass as hell. A definite favorite. But anyway, work harder on animations. QUALITY over quantity
Newgrounds is full of stick fights just like this. two stick men fighting for no apparent reason has been done over 100 times. for it to be original it has too be really really good or different in some way. it doesn't stand out in the crowd of hundreds of ones just like it. you will probably delete or class this review as useless but im just trying to make a point
naw its ok i made another one already im going to post it tommorow.
if you made the movie like more zoomed out the sticks might look better and ur prob expecting me to tlk abt out the white background wel i am lol u sud lik edit it a lil cuz this is rly good just a sugestion.
It's not original but it's still good
keep it up but be more unique next time.
Keep doing what you are doing :)
Hey chakraZ, I can see that the there has actually been worked on this flash and I think it is great for what it is!
I think your next step should be to either go back to this flash file and improve it by adding more frames in between or make a whole new flash and focus on the art.
You should also look into a pre-loader and implement the one line of code which stops the flash from looping :)
Keep working! :D
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