Proper Raptors

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-Team Lollercoaster-

Here is our submission for the January 2011 Movie Jam. Teams had 48 hours to make an animation of a story submitted in the forums. The story was written by our own voice actor, Eddache!

This was a really fun experience and I couldn't of asked for better teammates, every member really excelled at their role. Thanks for all of the reviews and score, and thank you Tom for the front page and 1st place in the jam!

Here is the story submission :
"Two velociraptors are about to watch the ballet. They are very high class, sophisticated and cultured velociraptors. None of the cast survive."


Oh God

I'm going to have so much fun using the majority of screencaps I'll make, as reaction images.


predictable yet still funny

it was obvious they would be eaten but the it wasn't terrible; animation felt alright in the sense and sake of flash, and the voicing with sound was at quite the good quality.

overall it was worth watching.


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Good but could use improvement

The art is top, but I think you should remove the increase size choice, because that ruins all your nice images. Also you cant hear what the raptors are saying over the music, perhaps increasing the volume of them or decreasing the volume of the music would greatly improve the viewing pleasure of this flash.


really liked the animation and it really shows the amount of effort that went into this, and its sad you didnt make it in time but im glad you continued and submitted.
i really like the mix of the background art and the animation (character mainly) combined, so props.
although for the story the joke at the end was great it felt a little forced in notion and a little quick. although it did get a little laugh it didnt really mix together too well.
also nice voice acting!

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too short + too predictable = not so funny

But.... Drawing, animation and voices are great

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4.41 / 5.00

Jan 31, 2011
4:01 AM EST
Comedy - Original
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