room for improvement
the animation and voices were good, but it was kinda dumb. it's a good idea, just needs to run a little smoother plot-wise
i think the animation style suited the flash quite nicely, especially the notebook sketch animation.
same views on the voices though, could have been better.
maybe you could try extending the part where he thinks of all the things that could go wrong. Extend it, and slowly exaggerate it more and more, i think it might add to the effect of the flash.
this wasn't even funny at all it was just stupid
bad animation and i didn't laugh. it sucked. try again please
Make an animation first, before you compare, then I might consider listening to such crap that is spilling out of your mouth.
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not bad but try harder