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P.S. May be a bit loud. (also crappy)

My exams finished today. To commemorate this joyous occasion I give you this short cartoon. Yeah, sorry if it's too short, but if you leave a review and mention it, don't just only say "too short"! Give like, suggestions and crap.

BTW, he's sharpening his pencil

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lol holy shit funny

so true.you have to work more on your animation but your writing a creativity is awesome and high.so far you just need to improve on the way you try to so all your creative juices(animation form),so try different styles lalalal and draw all the time(from life that is).


Yusuf responds:

thanks.


Ha!

I laughed sooooo fking hard cuz thats exactly what exams are like!!! xD
Well, not the explosion or whatever... Anyways, great job!!!


Yusuf responds:

haha, thanks!


Some Suggestions.

Nice credit animation, but the actual thing could use some of improvment.
First, add some color. I know you said it's supposed to be in black and white, but color, or at least shading, would help improve quality.
Second, add detail. There's not even a chair. Add a background. Put more stuff on what's supposed to be a wall. Draw other students.
Finally, don't use other animations. The exposion would've looked better if it matched the rest of the animation.


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Yusuf responds:

ok, thanks.


Pretty much the same all the way through

It's mostly a loop of the dude writing. With a couple clips of him doing other stuff. Also the animation needs to be cleaner, It looks like you tried to get this whole thing done in twenty minutes.


Yusuf responds:

it took me a good few hours, thank you very much.


This is horrible.

Please put more effort. It is looped animation, with some stolen animation.


Yusuf responds:

umm, stolen? really?

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Uploaded
Jan 28, 2011
6:32 PM EST
Genre
Experimental
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