nice 1st try
The gameplay was smooth (which is something most first timers miss). The music i love (yet somehow right when you'd get to the high up levels it moved to the piano rising bit xD go figure). the jump system was kind of whack, i'd jump about a cm below the jump and make it. As per the storyline... Try to put a little more effort into it (and include a skip button for those too impatient). Overall, i see a great team starting up.