nice !
the story is great and funny !
the animation is bad !
art is bad ! or passable !
7 is good !
Author Comments
well, this is my first submission onto newgrounds, so yay, i did it!
anyway, i hope you guys enjoy it, be as nice, or as big an asshole as you want with the review.
theres nothing really else to say, so watch.
That was a terrible end!
For the guy in the movie, anyway.
Either way, only giving seven for it.
Just don't feel it deserves more.
That wasnt too bad.
It wasn't the most entertaining piece on newgrounds. But, it wasn't that bad for a first flash either. I guess the only problem i had was the cheesy recycled sounds. Overall, not too bad
Haha
Congratulations on your first movie! I was quite amused watching it.
Good luck in the future!
Gratz
gratz on ur first submission good storyline u need to work more on the drawing but its ok the flash was nice
Credits & Info
- Views
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- Faves:
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- Votes
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- Score
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3.88 / 5.00
- Uploaded
- Jan 27, 2011
- 8:05 PM EST
- Genre
- Comedy - Original