Well, this is alright
i mean you've got a good style(assuming the first fish wasnt taken from somewhere else) and if you get started again im sure you could make some pretty good movies, with practice of course.
your getting better!
nice art, your definitely getting better in those areas.
no sounds or music
no smoothness in the animation part
just a tiny loop, nothing happens no story, try looping it up maybe
no pre-loader, even though its a tiny flash.
I like the artwork, but I'm not sure the radiated simpsons fish would be happy being impaled by a narwhal, plut it needz the soundzz.
Fine art and what happens is kind of weird. If there was any audio it would be better.
Pretty impressive animation!
I am pretty impressed with this short Flash animation loop for its detailed and dynamic animation. However, I believe this could have been a lot better if you added music and/or sound effects to make the animation more interesting.
Plus, Newgrounds does not really encourage short Flash animations under 30 seconds. Try compiling your shorts into one Flash file for longer length.