Nice First Effort

The humor content was pretty good for the first time around. I especially liked the "flast card" element. That was the highlight of the piece. I got a few chuckles out of it, which is good. That shows the ability to tell a story and carry a joke.

Of course, I gave this a 5 for a reason. And here goes:
Visuals - the mix of sprites, shapes, and clipart looked disjointed and a bit sloppy. You should make sure your different visual elements blend together. This could be a problem when you start doing animations with motion.
Voice Acting - pretty good for a first timer, but it sounded like you were too close to the mike or using a cheap mike.

In summary, it looked pretty bad; it only sounded OK, and the humor was pretty good. Work on the visuals especially and you too can soon be turning out really good flash animation.

Content was funny

Nice job. If I were to make one suggestion (and you know I am) it would be that the visuals didn't match the funny content. It was a single stagnant shot with little to no movement. But like I said the content was spot on, and isn't that what really counts. :-)

i liked it

the only main problem i heard was it sounded like you were to close to the mic but good work

Funny

Could have used a pic of the whitehouse or capitol building for the government, though. Meh.