make lots more
A fresh breath
Yep, this was hot! Though the story had some quirky holes in it, I think you did a great job piecing together a first prt. As has already been stated, a lot of the timing is unrefined in such a way that it steals from the momentum of the entire piece. Things that should not be under-addressed are many, and I insist timing is of the upmost importance especially with action oriented scenes.
I too am looking forward to some wonderful work from you as this series and you skills develop! Keep it up buddy
i actually really enjoyed this, keep making more man, you got me hooked :)
I enjoy the main character very much so. However as stated before, the storytelling, mainly near the beginning and especially at the subway scene was S L O W. I got it, the guy blew into pieces, there was little reason to show each piece for 5 seconds. And the conversations were usually "words" [wait a couple seconds] "words". Make it like a real conversation, a little quicker there too.
The animation is good, the story is likable and I enjoy the main character. Very promising series.
scary as hell 0_0