Great first attempt
I think some parts of the animation could use a little work. The pauses in the conversation are unrealistically long. But this is a seriously good first attempt.
This is seriously sexy. Please marry me!
I found it very funny. I'm gonna send this to my grandmother stat!
Best Flash Ever
No really, it's the best. It definitely made me laugh a few times. Good work. Also, I better see more from you in the future or consequences etc...
The voice acting and backgrounds need some work, but the plot and characters are good.