Heh,
That was fun.
Author Comments
This is the first flash animation I have ever made. I had to make it for school and I think it's not that bad.
I had much fun making it I'm going to make more animations when I have the time and I will try to make them better than this one.
Neutral
A fine movie indeed. But there could have been a start button or a replay button, so we can either choose to start the movie or watch the movie again at our own will. Also, the movie would've been more interesting if there was any voicing of the characters in general.
Good effort, though. :)
Not bad
Even though the sound effects were lame, and that it was not really funny, I liked it, and think you did a good job :)
Daria?
Hey doesnt the chick she was standing on look like the main characters friend in the show Daria? Lol just throwing that otu there, did you intend to have her looki like that or just a coincidence?
This ain't too bad
Whenever I see "this is my first flash" I expect to be blamming it. As such I was pleasantly surprised that this was actually pretty good. Original art style, smooth animation, easy to grasp plot (without anyone actually saying what's happening) The only thing that's missing is a preloader.
Thank you for not submitting garbage and just saying "this is my first flash" as an excuse.