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This Has To Stop

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JUST SAMPLE TO GET FEEDBACK IF I SHOULD CONTNIUE DOING MORE SHORTS LIKE THIS

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Crap

this flash is

enrichedmediagroup responds:

i respect you being honest but i like looking for pointers so i can get better this is only my second attempt.

True

Work on the audio and the timing. Good animation! Also, make sure the next one doesn't go on a continuous loop.

enrichedmediagroup responds:

thanks its not completely finish i just didnt wanted to get some feedback and advice before i spend all week on finish it.

Your point should be a little more clear

its okay, not the funniest thing ive ever seen. the audio quality is a little low, and you should work on your jokes a little. but aside from that, the animation quality is fairly good. keep going.

enrichedmediagroup responds:

thanks do you have any advice on how to record better quality audio with out being in a studio.

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Jan 19, 2011
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