This guy is past me! Good old times! This is shit past me!
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This movie is not very good but it is my first flash it is the first time I make a flash movie! here is the story: Mario stole the Yoshy from luigi and luigi get mad and get after mario but mario has a very very simple desteny! It's no sound! only on the main menu
you could have tried a bit harder
try testing your sprite skills before you make a newgrounds movie. learn how different sprites work, sounds, execrate. okay for a start.
Ehh
Its your first, so there is room for a lot of improvement..
A Simple Critique
Never be ashamed of your creativity...for better or for worse...if that's how that cat expresses himself...aight...only had to watch it once...
Not Very Good
I know it's your first, but it's just not very good. I can say you seem inspired, so keep trying and you might find with practice you can make some pretty awesome videos.
