pointless

They bearly have bodies you didn't had voices and it just plain sucks.

lol

this was funny as heck! i cant wait to see more of your work!

Some of its smooth

I doubt it was your fault there was no sound in this. I would certainly know that there are a lot of things that go so wrong whenever you try to submit something here. I did, however, manage to like this because the animation was actually good. While it was not the best stick figures could offer, still quite slick. You may want to go on the forums and ask someone or look to see if it has already been asked. I can only guess as to what these characters were trying to say.

The one on the left looked a lot like Ronald McDonald! I guess it's kind of devastating to win a T*rd of the Week award, but at least it passed. There seemed to be something weird going on with the background near the end. It was like the cartoon created a superimposed version of himself. You could also find out how to end it.

Quite interesting...

To be rating the lowest rated flash in the portal.

Im sorry, but the fact that It has no sound, no pre-loader, no play button, no replay button, really nothing but two stick dudes (the one with the red hair looks better than the other) and a floating box. Sorry, maybe it could be funny if you had the sound, but I dunno the first thing about flash. Try adding more detail to everything.

You gotta start somewhere.

You wanted to make a flash so you tried and anyone can tell you that you failed, however, I believe that you succeeded because you wanted to do something and you did.

My opinions won't change basic facts-

No one begins their first flash looking spectacular and if they do- good for them.
The truth is this video lacks more than just audio. The location of the television in relation to the couch gives the illusion that they collide. I noted the top right corner. You made a ceiling, a back wall, and a right wall- you never made the floor. I think had you made the floor the placement of the couch and TV would have been easier. The proportions of the body were odd. The human torso is smaller than both the arms and legs. I noticed you made two connected line areas for a lap when the gamer was sitting. I think it would be more beneficial to make his legs longer to look more natural.

I am not an animator. But I do know enough Character Animation Majors at my University to know that, "Animation like everything else will take alot of practice."