One of my first submissions in a while, it all revolves around my 2 OC's, Ike and Mike.
Ike eats mike's dinner, will mike get another chicken as he asks? Nah, probably not.
If you vote low on this, give me advice on how I can improve for next time around.
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Before you have to say it, it was told to me already, the vomit animation is'nt that great I know.
I'll improve on that the next time (though just the animation, not include vomit).
Thanks so far for the reviews, I like it when I receive comments that tell me where to improve in areas. ^^
It helps me get better in the long run. My humor apparently is geared toward a select audience, so this and other flashes I make may not be for everyone.
With that said, enjoy (or try to) the flash.
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Its apparent that some newgrounders are giving me low votes... and not really giving me feedback...
C'mon, seriously, I tried my hardest to make this good, if you are going to low vote me, leave me a comment on where I can improve. So it doesn't make you look like a typical newgrounders troll.
Funny.
I thought the movie was very funny. Your humor is definitely geared this towards a select audience, so you may not get that high of a score. The animation was done well (except for the vomit) and the computer generated voices added to the comedy. The only improves I can give you are, polish what you have and improve the story line. Good work.
i under stand that the vomit wasn't well done. But thanks for the review, I'll try and improve on my next submission.
Cute!
Improve the vocals and the animation is my suggestion, but great for one of your first!
I'll do my best
