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Evoluzione

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Here's a short movie called "Evolution". All content has been carefully checked for scientific accuracy and has been found not to contain any. The volume is a little loud for me but some younger people said it was OK. The project to find a preloader succeeded and has now been replaced by a project to find a preloader that works. Sorry for any inconvenience.

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Nice Drawings and Theme...

Loved the water animations and the educational theme... well done. Drawings could benefit from varying the line quality (thick outline, thinner inner lines), but were done very neat for a polished look. Image planes could benefit from changing color and making the objects further from the camera less saturated or cooler in value. Some bulls-eye composition issues in your framing... consider moving some of the objects like the chicks off to the side and changing the angle to 3/4 instead of frontal view. The basket could be made to look more natural as opposed to a weaved basket.

Stampini responds:

Hi,

Thanks for taking the time to write the review. I found all your points very helpful.

Bob

Hm.

Well, the animation was pretty good and I liked the music, a little repetitive though honestly. Also, even though you DID say it had no scientific accuracy it was a little TOO wrong for my tastes. Like for example, how could a fish evolve in three seconds and not even change from fish form. Still, good.

Stampini responds:

Thanks for the comments; very helpful.

Its fine if you ask me!

it wasnt bad...in fact i liked it!! but the song was kinda repetitive and the size of the fish sometimes was too big...example when he falls from the mountain... but thats all that i have to say
Good Work!

Stampini responds:

Thanks for the comments.

Politics aside, it's pretty good.

Animation wasn't bad, the artwork was great, and your soundtrack selection was fitting.

Stampini responds:

Thanks for taking the time to comment.

Wonderful!

Bella!! Anch'io sono italiano! Ahah!
Anyway, it's brilliant, the life comes from the space :D
it would be great with some art, 6 for the drawing..
(Do not flag me, the Italian sentence is not offensive, it says "Hey, I'm Italian Too")

Stampini responds:

Grazie per i commenti tipo

That's Italian for "Thank you for the kind comments"

Credits & Info

Views
4,097
Votes
9
Score
3.81 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jan 12, 2011
8:37 AM EST
Genre
Informative