not really looking forward to the follow up
the story has potential but the animation has no depth looks flat and the sound could use brushing up too
Author Comments
I really put a lot into this little teaser trailer, the fla. file was about 100mb when i was finished since i had so many movie clips. This is my first flash movie but I have been animating traditionally for about a year now at SCAD. The trailers sole purpose is to generate hype for a flash series that I will begin working on shortly called The Last Bee. The whole concept of this was to show the dialogue between two antagonists in the form of a mission briefing. The General is the leader of the ants and other voice is bounty hunter Preying Mantis. I wanted the viewer to feel like this was a real conversation so I carefully wrote out and voice acted it all myself. I had a great time putting it all together and will be putting up more and more movies with increasing quality. Thanks for reading and be sure to show your friends.
Good Ideas
I thought your idea and animation is fairly above average, but the dialogue and voice acting sounds a bit cheesy and unrefined. Try to find some fiction or script writers that are used to this type of writing and have them critique your work. This way the end product will probably be much more likely to have a higher score.
Gregmation responds:
Thanks, I'll listen to you review and produce some higher quality work.
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