Great art, story needs work
The artwork was awesome, but the pacing of the dialog was too slow, so the story dragged.
Author Comments
This is our first animation, and we hope yall enjoy.
comments and critique are welcome! Thanks!
cool
ok that was nice and your new! thats pretty good!! I give you a 8 because I could not here a single thing. but nice animation!!!!!
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3.25 / 5.00
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- Jan 9, 2011
- 3:17 AM EST