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Jim & Joe: Pancake

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This is my first flash, so try not to have high expectations, or any expectations at all.

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Welllllllllllllll

About your animation i don't got much to say because theres not much going on but its a very nice start.The characters don't have much life in them and theres a moment in the flash when theres nothing happening and its not very visually interesting just staring at 2 weird drawings(no offense)for a moment.Those type of silent moments its always good to add them after one of the characters does something really stupid or says something stupid or funny.You should of added more movement in the characters like making them look like theres breathing,add them blinking theres eyes and you should of really added some background or some animated background so when those two characters stop moving at least i know my browser didn't freeze.

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Uploaded
Jan 6, 2011
2:39 PM EST