Dot Dot Dot - Animated

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***PLEASE DO NOT rip this and upload to Youtube. I've uploaded it myself under the account "ricepiratenewground s". Thanks.

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I wanted to try my hand at a typography animation, so I figured I'd give it a whirl with one of my favorite voice acting tracks in the audio portal: Dmac's "Dot Dot Dot", based on a review of Super PSTW Action RPG, created by Rhete.

* Thanks a million, Tom, for the FP! :D
** The background track is from Carl Orff's 'O Fortuna' (1935)

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Here's the ACTUAL review by axman13, beautiful misspellings and all (which was deleted, sadly):


i reley dont wan to say this, but i have to now.
this game is so esey. i mean, all you do is hit the spacebar. thats it! how is this an RPG anyway? you cant contrail anything but what it says on the screen! what if i didnt want to buy the potion? what apout quests? all you can upgrade is stranth? there is no way you can lose to the boss at the end! this game is crap! its not even an RPG at all! i mean look at it! in what way is this supposed to be an RPG if you can do quests and stuff? all you do is press one butten the entier time! explain to me! the athore coments al totol lies! is it supposed to be stick dudes? i dont even know how this damn game got the daily 3rd prize, or a rating of 4.26!
pepole think this review is worthles.
go ahead! say it! i dont care! im just trying to make a point here!
blam this piece of crap!!!!

P.S the only reson im giving this a 1 is beacuase the voices where pretty good. but thats it!"



Deven Mack has to be by far my most favorite voice actor on Newgrounds, he puts so much strength into it! So much power!
And my favorite part was when he said "Beacuase". I laughed hard. Thanks, guys.

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Well done

Good text animation and a funny concept.

D-Mac, from listening to you years and years ago you have a much better control of your voice and have really improved your craft. I think your voice not only makes the video better, it quite nearly makes the whole video. I feel like the animation may have been made after the voice work.

Good job to both of you.

god this is genius,

a dramatic reading including the spelling mistakes is hilarious. Love at the end the way he pronounces "beacuase" sounds like a french words or something ^^ Like the description of "contrail", very good job.

Gotta love typograhanimation!

Loved the animation, although it relied heavily on the sound. Not saying it's a bad thing, that's what it should do really. I'm just saying, that was the glue holding this sandwich together, without that it would just be bread. Yeah. A glue sandwich..

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RicePirate responds:

I completely agree :) I've made no claims that the comedic success of this animation is of my own doing. I give much of the credit to D-Mac for the amazing voicing, the serendipitous combination of O Fortuna, Rhete for making the game, and Axmas13 for reviewing it.

At the heart of it, I'm just a fan.


Its almost exactly like "Dramatic Love Letter Reading" on Youtube. Still pretty funny though.

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4.46 / 5.00

Jan 6, 2011
11:12 AM EST
Comedy - Original
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