Very cruddy

This was just bad all around. First off it doesn't stop on the frame that says "PLAY" on it. That and it keeps looping very quickly which quickly leads up to the viewer getting their heads to be hurting from how loud it becomes very quickly.

If you were to make another flash I would suggest using :gotoAndStop() and make it stop on the title frame. That and have the music simply play on the frames with the animation instead of doing it as you did so that viewers don't have to hear multiple layers of the same sound playing at once.

Overall, fix the frames up and spend more time animating and you might have a better shot next time.

Blarg

I've noticed that none of your videos have a replay button and the music keeps playing after the animation is over so you usually have 2 or more tracks playing at once and it start to screw up, in this one the only musical problem is that the music is a bit too long and it keeps going on after the animation is over, but at least it stops before it starts playing again so there's never two songs playing at once. You should fix this stuff first then work on funnier jokes and better quality animation and real backgrounds.

uuum

not sure what I just saw. but umm good effort?

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Happy new year! hahaha