ehm
try to make the animation SMOOTH
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dark madness 0.5 trailer, dark madness 0 is a short (working), and dark madness 1 in april 5 more or less :D
sorry for the bad trailer i make it in 8 minutes xD
AX3L001 responds:
well... the trailer i make it in 8 minutes but the serie in more or less 3 or 4 weeks tomorrow i upload the firts chapter
ta bien...
pero debes arreglar tus errores de animacion antes de subir la animacion, por ejemplo: al caer, debe caer para atras, o sea, la cabeza debe caer para atras primero y luego el cuerpo, ademas debe soltar las manos cuando cae, por que se ve muy como decirlo... tiezo al caer... y ademas debes mejorar tu ingles un poco mas, mas tarde cuando te conectes te mandare un tuto de como animar frame by frame, eso ayudara un poco... xD
Take your time.
If your going to make a trailer take more time perfecting it. Don't throw it together in 8 minutes. If I were you, I would take some online flash tutorials. Don't be impatient. Take your time and try to make your animations better instead of making them in 8 minutes. Also try and check your grammar, I had a hard time focusing on the basic animation apposed to the bad English.
More footage
I can see you tried really hard on this, all I think you need is some more footage, there was a little too much text. Keep trying, you def have potential :)
yea
you tried hard, but it isn't enough