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did what you asked, Here's an idea, how about something thats not a loop? good animation for a newb so Gj reguardless.
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Hey everyone! I'm new to this flash program and im experimenting new flash ideas. This is my first test to see how it turned out. Even if it's bad plz dont give bad comments. Give me comments that tell me how to improve!!!
Not bad
could use some background music or some speech, but other than that the animation is pretty good.
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keep at it
Way too short
But what was there was cute; I'd like to see what you go on to do w/ a longer story. Kid's eyebrow was (I think) too pronounced and animation was generally jerky, but it told a complete story, and I respect that.
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