That's cute! Dile must've had a hard morning...
I can´t tell teh quality was good, you can work a bit on that, but i liked the cartoony style, i cudn´t hear it eighter because there was people here, anyway i think you got potential, just keep the quality up!
Heh! At least the sounds was good!
Meanwhile, along with your practice you can work on effects and voice overs for other artists! You are good at making these cartoon effects, and people need artists like this for their projects and collaborations so go a head and give it a try! I'm sure you'll succeed!
Actually, those sound effects are by Hanna Barbera