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My Very First Animation

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Hello Guys I know it suck cause i want to know whats still needed to make a death cliff video


So Guys No Bad Comments
Thnks For The Reviews I will make a improved video

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Nevermind.. It does work lol

At it was kinda cool but simple. The music kept playing over itself, fix that.

my say

Better than most firsts but i agree with the others.. music looping needs fixing and maybe a plot line for the flash. stick figures have been used so many times on NG that i can't say anything about them :P

Loading Bar needed!

When i realised there was a movie, I had to 'meh' a little. You have talent, no doubt about it, but just try to 'smooth' everything over. I noticed some jaggedy bits, and some pauses in animation. I think that you have a problem with animating two things at once, just practice on that. (And I'm not that good at animation, so feel free to disregard this review if you wish! lol)

nice try

this was better than some of the other videos Ive seen today and its your first

?????

Is this your first movie on newgrounds. Not too bad you at least put effort forth even though you didn't know how to do it. It is actually pretty good.

Credits & Info

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Faves:
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Votes
10
Score
3.00 / 5.00

Uploaded
Dec 24, 2010
9:42 AM EST
Genre
Experimental