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In Dictation

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Hey guys, long time no see.

Here's some flash I made. I hope you like it. :)

thx for front page btw.


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I wish I could give you two scores for this.

The first half was great. Well animated, and with just a touch of subtle humour in there. Often your characters are either static or move in a somewhat robotic manner. During the campfire scene the movement looked fairly normal. And was that an attempt at going frame-by-frame at the beginning there? Either way, it's easy to see that you're improving.

And then the second half.

I don't know what happened, but everything went downhill. The great animation disappeared, the humour disappeared, and the ending just wasn't good. There's nothing wrong with abrupt endings if they're funny (see: Gasoline Man), but this one wasn't funny.

In the end, the great beginning doesn't make up for the mediocre ending I'm afraid. I'd give the first half a 4/5 and the second half a 2/5, for an overall 3/5.

Gasoline man wasn't animated as well, but overall it's a much better movie because of the humour and the fact that it feels like a complete movie. Good luck on your next one.

someplaceelse responds:

Yah, I know what you mean. :(

I wanted to finnish this as soon as possible. I was running out of time, so most likely I rushed that last part, and the result was still watchable, but not the best I could do in my opinion.

This year however, I'm setting no deadlines, so I won't run into the same problem again.

Thanx for reviewing!

EDIT: Oh yah, frame by frame. >_< Yes that was frame by frame.

Now try to guess what I spent my whole summer learning how to do. ;)

I got it!

I was reading review like o god i better pay attention but it wasent even hard to follow along... :P

someplaceelse responds:

Wow... Thanx. XD I'm so glad you got it! :)


i tried to understand but.. well 10/10 for the effort.! yay.! :D

someplaceelse responds:

thanx! yay! :D


I couldn't understand the majority of this.

someplaceelse responds:

yep, most people can't


The animation is fine, but I could not for the life of me figure out what the hell was going on.