Its nice but something wrong
The animation is nice and funny but the only problem is that I agree with jab's review here that the policeman's screaming voice is really soft and calm, it must be angry and loud... but not as loud as a jackhammer.
Second, kids aren't allowed to go to the bar because they are still too young to drink like the one you show in the animation that the kid is 8 years old and he have a plan after he was kick out of the bar, plus the disguise of him is sometimes useless, you must not only put moustache on him but of course, change of hair, clothes and he needs to use something that makes him tall so he'll look like a young adult!
Third, since this flash isn't a Winter-Flash Off submission, try to use other pre-loader and don't put XMAS Songs
Next time use common sense okay so you'll be popular!
I have to say I was pretty impressed by a simple flash movie like this. I understand why you silently screamed XD. Otherwise great plot for this flash.
thank you finally somebody with some common sense. really appreciate the 9 dude. ;D
good but try not to whisper scream
it was good but if you didn't want to scream it would've been funnier for the guy to just talk with the screaming body language then just whisper scream
i know lol it was late at night and i didn't want to wake up the folks. XD
the idea was funny
but it sounded like you were scared to actually yell into the microphone.... i loved the way the characters moved and the story was good. so i gave it a 5 neways.
thank you very much for the review, the 10, and the 5. Dont forget to check out my youtube in the author comments, thats where my other flash animations are. some are on newgrounds as well.
Everything about this is terrible... BUT...
+1 for the black guy. That brings your rating to a whopping 1 point. Congratulations.