good for a first flash but....
the animation was a bit choppy.
also I liked the 007 thing at the end.
Author Comments
This is my third flash video.
This is the first flash video I sort of took seriously and I hope you enjoy it and please tell me your thoughts about it.
the background music is: Epic Rock Music #2 - Instrumental Macho Rock Orchestra by Miika153 on youtube.
Thanks a lot!
*Approx. Show time is 1minute(s) 1 second(s), 61 second(s)*
Heh
I liked it a lot. Don't have much to say about it, just keep em' coming!
Brownish responds:
Will do!
Enh
It's okay, some comedic moments (not sure if intended), could use some refining
Zero.
I'm sorry, but spamming the BBS with your personal vendettas isn't the best way to keep your cool going.
I will give you criticism:
Points for Improvement:
1. Give style to written out things, don't use usual lettertypes.
2. Work on your drawings of everything, it was really sloppy, just put more work into it, like three times as much work.
3. Replay button at end.
4. Better storyline; it just came out of the blue.
5. Make it longer, with more moments of tension.
That's all.
Brownish responds:
Thanks for the critiscm but ...i didn't spam the bbs :[
Not bad but...
I had to rate 1.
Sorry.
Lots of love,
Random BBS guy.
<3