Nice :)
I love Wanderer! :) And the story too ;)
Author Comments
This is my first big flash project. It's about an angel and demon falling in love. I'd love some feedback, everything was drawn in Flash 8 with a mouse and I'm still learning so be gentle. The music is a public domain piece the title is at the end. Hope you like it, I think it turned out pretty good for one of my first tries. :)
PS: if anyone knows how to stop the music once the animation is done, let me know. everything I tried didn't work :/
Jaybell responds:
Thank you
Nice
I dont kno much about flash, all i know is that i watch them. But It could have been a little longer. But it was cute and I liked it. You did a whole lot better than some folks. Great Job for your first time!
Jaybell responds:
thank you
Nice music
I don't know why but this reminds me of Devildoll and Candy by Joe Sparks.
I can't see no Radiskull though ...
Jaybell responds:
I'll have to check that flash out I've never heard of it, thanks for your review
It wasn't terrible...
Word of advice, remember that your audience is mostly male. We don't exactly appreciate gay love stories.
Jaybell responds:
you know I'm a female, right?
good!
this was one of your beginning flashes right? i felt that it was done well, and the music suited it well! the only gripe i had with it was that it was too short, i wished see more, and that the music continued to play after the flash ended.
other than that, a solid flash! good luck!
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