Very good humor
The file at first seemed to take awhile but that caught up in no time, nice job on the loader page, its always the first thing people see and you presented a nice looking one, The toon you have here is actually very funny and you presented us with lots of funny characters and unique, the sounds were really good so nice job on the voice over, even the song was funny, not to mention you gave the toon lots of humor lots of little jokes here and there, so i was glad to have seen this it was amusing and very funny, as to improve on it, not sure maybe better animation for the limbs and stuff and really make new scenes in there aswell, but mostly it was just fine, so i hope you make more of this like in a series of sorts, anyways nice toon.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe somewhat shorter not as long but not too short either, and improved animation on the limb movment
Funny story and great humor in this one