pretty standard
you need to make a different game than chocobreak. there are a million chocobreak on newgrounds.
Author Comments
My first game!
I used The Games Factory 2 to make this. I thank clickteam for making The Games Factory 2 and also PC Fun who made the graphics. I did the some of the programming. I used a tutorial. This was really fun to make! It took a while(1 hour ) since it was my first game and I had to learn on how to make it, and everything, but it was worth while. I hope you have fun playing it too! Please leave comments on games you want me to make, because I will be taking requests!
Please don't comment too meanly, but be open to share your opinions in a nice calm way.
FIXED: The Hi-score glitch where it didn't take you to the main menu.
tutorial
this is the "Games Factory 2" tutorial. so I would have to give it a 0/5 and a 0/10 for no originality, technically stealing, and you messed it up. how do you mess up a tutorial?
OneAwesomeWaffle responds:
I know it was the tutorial, I said it in the author's comments. Anyway this was my first encounter with The Games Factory 2. I just downloaded it yesterday. I honestly didn't think of uploading this. I just wanted people to give requests on games I should make.
Just Don't Do It
I've messed around with The Games Factory, and I recognize this game. It comes directly from the tutorial. From what I can see, you didn't change anything. I wouldn't have a problem with the game if you changed it a little bit from the tutorial, but it is exactly the same. Next time you upload a game, at least try to make it your own.
OneAwesomeWaffle responds:
I honestly didn't plan to upload this game. The next game I make will be made JUST by me. Thanks for your review.
alright
good first game attempt but I had the same issue as other when trying to replay for higher score it kept just returning me to the leader board
OneAwesomeWaffle responds:
Fixed it.
ok game
the ball go to fast and i lose all my life quick
OneAwesomeWaffle responds:
Well, I honestly don't think the ball goes too fast. I guess you will need to practice a little bit so you can control the ball.