This has potential, you need to add more frames cause it moves by to fast, have voice overs, the crying sfx was annoying as hell, make it longer, more epic, more zombies, What the hell happened to the one guy with the green bandna, and take out the instructions of the preloader, Otherwise the only thing was good was the art :)
P.S. hope this helps you :)
You're gonna have to try better than that. And what the fuck is up with the crying?!
and then John was a zombie???
I don't even know what's going on in this animation.
It's just a series of mini animations that's lacking the storyline and the connection between them, and an extremely annoying high-pitch crying sound.
Also, the dialogues remind me of Doom: Repercussions of Evil.
You will probably need a bit of work to make a decent animation out of this. And you definitely need to start forming complete sentences.
need to work on grammer, horrible story line, and dont know whats happening
well the tetx was to fast to read. But i did like the sound affects in it i hope you work on it so i can see the final one!