Not terrible

This was very mediocre, in that it seemed to have equally good and bad things about it. The bad parts were that there was so little that happened and it needed more of a story/punchline. The good parts are that the animation is actually really good. I was expecting something dumb when I saw this, but was actually a little surprised. Next time, you should work on making it longer with more going on. I will say that it seems as though you got the animation part down just where you need it.

Good, however

That is one creepy fucking bird.

BTW love the sound effects.

For a Beginner

Not Bad. But there is alot of stuff you need to fix, like the speed and that(Like you said). And in the future i hope to see more work from you ;)

Nice, but short...

Hey, nice job for your 3rd flash. Your movie wasn't bad, but it needed a lot of improvement.

First: You need to find sound FX! Your mouth sounded very, very cheesy.
Second: Work on timing. The bird snoring took up too much time and the squirrel thing laughing and getting his egg took too long as well.
Third: Give your movie a plot. Make it longer. This sort of short seemed very unoriginal.

I did enjoy your art. It was a little rough, but I can tell that with practice you'll be able to build it up. Keep workin' at flash and be creative!

nice

this is good.
Not only is it a great start but it's a good flash animation.
keep it up.
this cite needs more like this.