Bloody well done Marsume, you are getting so much better. I can not wait until you realease the actual video. Please, whatever you do just keep on creating episodes and go mad with your animation.
:O Thanks man!
great animation but...
Was that Mastermind?? :)
Looks pretty sweet indeed
However, I too, had issues with the filters. High quality, standard size, it ran "meh" during the red scenes. I have a fairly nice CPU and gfx card running this thing, so I feel a lot of people are going to have much more serious issues. Might be something to consider.
If that is resolved, I would love to see more of this.
Hmm, that's quite unfortunate. Every machine I've tested this on has ran fine, but I'll keep it in mind. Thanks :0
The animation is up on youtube, that version might be less lag intensive.
I thought you animation was great. I loved the way you made the yes with the gradients. Your smooth animation, vioce acting, and story made me want more. good job! 10!
Great stuff! BUT...
Your usage needs tweaking... there are certain parts that will horrify the grammar nazis.
The Path of his Father...
It would have been better had you had the man commissioning Collin say,
... if he follows the same path AS his father, or if he continues down the same path as his father, or if he takes the same path as his father... do you understand?
Do This Mission... in that particular conversation, an operative in control of another operative might be far more likely to use better English and say this:
Connor will carry out this mission, Collin is to carry out this mission... etc.
I would be happy to um, what is the word? -Beta- your next script, if you like...
Never done a script before! Might be fun! I write too much Doctor Who fanfiction anyway... WELL there can never be too much of THAT, but still...
Other than those types of things, this was great! Nothing else wrong with it that I could see. I don't do Flash, yet, but hey. This was great.
Yeah, I never really noticed that before, but the script/story wasn't written by me. I was just given some voices and the outline of what the storywriter wanted the scene to look/feel like.
Thanks though :)